Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy with everything organized and in the correct place

Essay topics:

Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.

Many human beings believe that it is critical to keep your home and workplace neat, and everything should be systematized and placed in the right spots. I totally agree with this opinion, because neatness can influence your mood and the organized place of work might help in the processes of work.
The main reason why tidiness is essential is that it can affect people's behavior and mood. Various events and accidents may change an individual condition, but you will feel appeasement and relaxation if you have a comfortable and tidy house. The friends and visitors your home will also have a favorable impression if they see how many efforts and diligence were put into tidying up the house. According to a recent survey, people with a positive attitude have more chances to be successful in their work and life. Furthermore, a tidy house is more simple to support in cleanness than a dirty one so that it can save more time, which could be spent with your necessity and family.
Also, the order at your workplace can assist you to be more effective and productive. When things and instruments are placed in order employee will spend less time searching them. Moreover, if tools are on the floor, workers can stumble and get an injury or a wound. Further, many companies have a system of fines, and a worker can be punished if implementations are not in order.
In conclusion, I believe that it is essential to keep most things organized and in the correct place because the organization makes it easy to find them.

Votes
Average: 7.1 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 4.92783505155 264% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 5.05154639175 376% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 264.0 206.0 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76136363636 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64930373149 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.4684388607 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25064643156 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853608485866 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759177589826 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162266772113 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828515752954 0.0580467560999 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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