Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Many people think that information about many subjects like scientific research, business, and the academic world should be freely shared among all people, whereas others believe that some parts about this information have a high value to be shared.
This essay discusses both opinions, and then I will give my own opinion about this matter.
The main reason why the information should be free is that more people will have access to knowledge. Therefore, free information allows people who cannot afford an education in school or university have a chance to get an equal education. The second reason is that people can give contributions to current researching projects using shared information. For example, the struggle with some cancers possible because many scientists contributed their data-analyzing reports, surveys or surveillance about their patients. Furthermore, countries which have programmes of swapping in researching have better and last technologies in comparison to which do not do it.
However, some information can be too valuable for sharing, and for reaching an advantage over other countries, so it cannot be shared for free. Moreover, in the modern world, we have patents right, and if your company want to use some information, which is not spread for free, you are obligated to pay the payment for it. Also, data in the military sector usually is not shared because the security of the country can be in danger. Consequently, not all information can be shared.
In conclusion, in my opinion, some type of knowledge should spread among people for free because it helps our society to grow and change this world for the better. But some information is just cannot be shared in reason of security and getting an advantage over others.
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- IELTS 13 G T4 Essay 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... give my own opinion about this matter. The main reason why the information shou...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is usually
...r it. Also, data in the military sector usually is not shared because the security of the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18596491228 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81717460603 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.542693364 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323437259278 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113561399429 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910576438489 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177713782684 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10925288501 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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