The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The pie charts indicate the percentage of online sales for retail of electronics & appliance, food & beverage, home furnishings and video games in Canada in 2005 and 2010. Overall, it is evident that the online shopping sales for retail sectors have a few minor differences between 2005 and 2010.
By 2005, the sales of electronics and appliance was the highest at 35 percent, but this figure decreased to 30 percent in 2010. By contrast, food & beverage sales only reached approximately one fifth in 2005, whereas by 2010 it accounted for 32 percent, which was the highest of the four sectors.
Online sales of home furnishing declined from 25 percent to 15 percent between 2005 and 2010. Interestingly, the online sales for retail of video games occupied at just under 20 percent in 2005 and it rose by 5 percent in 2010.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 691.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93571428571 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6980141142 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 127.690721649 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 198.9 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.6046153055 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278326861984 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167870634417 0.0766984524023 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773520674383 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212936327843 0.12726935374 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103308228737 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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