Write a letter to your teacher explaining sudden decision of leaving the course and returning to your home country.
- Express thanks to the teacher
- Explain why you had to leave
- Explain what part of course you enjoyed the most.
Dear Miss Maria,
My name is John Mathews, and I am taking IELTS training in your class. First of all, I would like to bid thank you for all your efforts, and dedication with which you make learning process so easy and fun.
Unfortunately, I have to leave the course half-way through. This is because I have a personal emergency. Yesterday, I got a call from my parents, and they told me about the ill-health of my grandfather. I would want to stay close to him as I am the only grandchild who is close to him. Owing to which, it is important for me to travel to my home country as soon as possible.
However, I would like to take the opportunity to mention that the lecture on how to write an essay or a letter effectively was my favourite throughout the curriculum. I could witness the change in my writing skills, as I feel more confident in expressing ideas.
I wish you all the very best for future endeavours. I am surely going to come back and complete my course once the family commitment is sorted.
Thank you for your patience and enthusiasm towards teaching.
Your Sincerely,
John Mathews
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ll the very best for future endeavours. I am surely going to come back and comple...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, so, thus, i feel, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57213930348 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72046970612 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63184079602 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6362291552 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4615384615 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164338216669 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575900362853 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494473545744 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932749553908 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041805089125 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.