you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your lettergive details of your visit to the restaurantexplain the reason for

Essay topics:

you and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
write a letter to the restaurant manager. in your letter
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for celebration
say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my satisfaction shown by your staff during our visit.
We had visited your restaurant last Thursday for celebrating our friends birthday party. We had pre booked the table as we know the restaurant is always busy due to its location. The table which was assigned to us was air conditioned room, so that we could celebrate without any disturbance of the people. The ambience of the restaurant was eye catching and soothing music was played which was mesmerizing.
As we have mentioned during reserving a table about birthday occasion, to our surprise, your team had arranged a chocolate cake for our friend and a box of handmade chocolate as a gift, which was out of the box. The food served was piping hot and delicious. The waiter at our table was courteous and cheerful.
I would like to thank you once again for wonderful response and will recommend your restaurant to more people.
Best regards,
Tim frank.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... We had pre booked the table as we know the restaurant is always busy due to its...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80952380952 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65182412724 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2650992083 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191121230433 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773182449879 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721925800112 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125386741817 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366657809899 0.0580467560999 63% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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