You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
what course you are studying
what things you are not happy about
what you expect from the school director.
Dear Sir,
My self Milan Desai, I am currently enrolled in part-time cooking classes at St. Mary college, in London. I am penning down this epistle in connection with issues that I have been currently facing while pursuing the night school course in your esteem institute. Allow me to elaborate it.
It is a french pastry cooking class and I have been enrolled in this class since last one month. This course is specifically built from people who have left school early in their career. It is three-month course with one practical lesson on every Saturday.
During my joining, I have been informed that we have to complete at least six practical's by the time we enter into our final month of course. But to my surprise, we were never taken out for practical session till now. When tutor was questioned relating to these issues, he informed us that two practical classes were cancelled due to funding issues. Besides this, teacher assigned to teach on this course arrive an hour late every time. No update given by a college about his late arrival.
I would be really grateful to you if you can look into this matter immediately and if possible please rescheduling two missed practical classes for students as we have already spent hefty some of money on the course. It would be really beneficial for us if you could rearrange new tutor to us for the remaining time.
I look forward to hearing from you and your active involvement in the problem.
Yours sincerely,
Milan Desai.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an issue' or simply 'issues'?
Suggestion: an issue; issues
...ng down this epistle in connection with an issues that I have been currently facing while...
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Line 13, column 257, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
.... When tutor was questioned relating to this issues, he informed us that two practic...
^^^^
Line 17, column 177, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
...classes for students as we have already spend hefty some of money on the course. It w...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, really, so, while, at least, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.861003861 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47432214786 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 290.88556701 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.175604707 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201358282025 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616094993353 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612280473821 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116854322838 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568545707774 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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