You are attending a training program in a foreign country. Write to your manager and say that you want to stay longer in that country for personal reasons. Include the following in your letter:
– How did you benefit from the training program?
– Why do you want to stay longer?
– When are you planning to come back?
Dear Mr. Smith,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to request an extension for my current leave in Paris in order to visit some historic places and museums.
Initially, the training course was immensely beneficial. Since the instructor is experienced and has magnificent illustration abilities, we gained substantial amounts of knowledge and cognition in the field of software security. Furthermore, the provided material clarifies all the main points mentioning every detail, so, if the employees forget a specific part from the given course, they will find it easily by doing a quick search through these notebooks.
Actually, the weather here is fascinating and the country is vastly picturesque due to the existence of mountains and landscapes everywhere. So, I wonder if you can permit an extension in the favor of visiting some historic places and enjoy the awesome climate.
Finally, because of the due date of the current project, I would not spend more than a week here so as to return by the 15th of July. In addition, I can work remotely for 4 hours daily to complete as many tasks as I could, to reduce<span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="to "></span> the pressure on my colleagues.
Thanks a lot for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Mark Ryan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 98, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...I would not spend more than a week here so as to return by the 15th of July. In addition...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27751196172 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60917815899 2.54303337028 142% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698564593301 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3938039214 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129343691506 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506203815966 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409429011213 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703730966957 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406334588445 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.