You have just returned from holiday and were not satisfied with your trip. Write to the travel agency. In your letter
Say where / when you went on holiday
Explain why you are not satisfied with your holiday
Tell them what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I recently returned from my vacation at the place you recommended-Whispering palms, Badagry, Lagos and I am writing to complain about the service received at the location.
To start, I must commend your efforts from my visa application to it been granted. I travelled Last week Monday for a five days holiday and I did not receive value for the money paid, considering th heavy charges.
Sadly, there was no internet connection at my room, I could not access the WiFi because it was not showing among the available options showing on my laptop. Also, the toilet drips water on the floor once the flushed is pressed. I reported at the reception and requested for a change of room. But, I was told all the rooms are occupied and mine would not be changed.
As you can see, the experience was not palatable and I deserve some level of compensation to make up to ThE shortcomings. also, I would want your management to investigate the services of the hospitality company you are partnering with, before recommending them to your clients.
I look forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Carissa Jones
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-17 | rakeshsharma.msbi | 84 | view |
| 2019-11-17 | sudheerssmg | 87 | view |
| 2019-11-17 | sudheerssmg | 87 | view |
| 2019-10-09 | b.past | 70 | view |
| 2019-09-10 | Mike1510 | 73 | view |
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:1. Say why he / she would not enjoy going to college2. 66
- you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.How important the licence is to youAsking how he/she found itSaying how you would love to thank him/her. 78
- you have been studying French for one semester at university but have decided to change your language course to English Write a letter to the Dean of studies Professor Andrews explain why you wish to change your course of studies ask if it is possible to 88
- An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at theairport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte 73
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ded-Whispering palms, Badagry, Lagos and I am writing to complain about the servi...
^^
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pressed. I reported at the reception and requested for a change of room. But, I w...
^^^
Line 6, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and I deserve some level of compensation to make up to ThE shortcomings. also, I ...
^^
Line 6, column 123, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...sation to make up to ThE shortcomings. also, I would want your management to invest...
^^^^
Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...them to your clients. I look forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Caris...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87564766839 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97923406145 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663212435233 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2065156616 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72727272727 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234727398858 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083635884797 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888949603345 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131428946108 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925866788637 0.0580467560999 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.