You have just won two tickets to a concert and want to invite your friend to go with you.
Write a letter to your friend. In the letter
• give details about the concert
• describe how you won the tickets
• explain why you’ve chosen your friend to go with you.
Dear Jane,
Hi. I am writing this letter to share with you that I have won two tickets for a concert and you will be excited to know who the performer is. Not only this, we get a chance to have a photograph clicked with the singer.
This programme is going to happen seven days from now, that is 25stJuly, 2020 and let me now tell you about the performer. Yes, it is our favourite Euphoria Band!! Aren’t you thrilled to know this? I am not able to control my emotions because of the excitement running in my blood. I went to the Super Market the other day to buy some groceries for myself. While paying on the bill counter, I overheard two people talking about some concert. Out of curiosity, I approached them to fetch a few details and eventually got the contact details of the organizing body. I contacted them and they told me that there is an offer wherein I just have to play a small quiz and if I answer all questions correctly, I win two tickets. I took the quiz and within 12 minutes, I got a congratulation mail from them with two QR codes to access my tickets.
Both of us have been great fans of this band since our school days. You must be remembering that we used to buy each of their albums out of our pocket money. The moment I got to know that Euphoria is going to be the performers, the only name that struck my mind was yours. I am sure you will add this date to your calendar.
Looking forward to seeing you soon to have a blast.
Take care.
Yours truly,
Navpreet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jane, Hi. I am writing this letter to share wi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a photograph clicked with the singer. This programme is going to happen seven ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...th two QR codes to access my tickets. Both of us have been great fans of this ...
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...is band since our school days. You must be remembering that we used to buy each of their album...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will add this date to your calendar. Looking forward to seeing you soon to ha...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d to seeing you soon to have a blast. Take care. Yours truly, Navpreet
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... soon to have a blast. Take care. Yours truly, Navpreet
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 32.9175257732 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 285.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29473684211 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35974760115 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 127.690721649 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59298245614 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1498059823 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292296205165 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803055834575 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827063061722 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183705710596 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725035329887 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.