You have a new job and can no longer attend your regular English class.
Write a letter to the English school. In your letter:
- describe the situation
- explain the problem
- say what you would like to happen now that you cannot attend the lesson.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am MD Rahaman, a student of your regular English class. I am writing you to describe a situation arise regarding my regular class timetable which not allowing me to attend the class scheduled routine.
I would like to inform you happily that recently I have manage to join a company as marketing executives which I was looking for long time. There offer is quite good though the time schedule is very much compact and strict. As I am in provisional period, I need to follow the rules and regulation very carefully. The matter of fact that, as marketing executive I need to spend longer time in the evening to assess company product requirements there, because of this it is not possible for me to attend the evening shift class I enrolled for in your institute. I am very much kin to finish the English course with you institute but I am afraid I have no scope to continue with current class timetable.
So, I would like to request you if it is possible to shift me with the late night batch. I know late night batch is quite demanding for the professionals but it would be great help for me if I can join.
I am looking forward for you response.
Your Sincerely
MD Rahaman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... attend the class scheduled routine. I would like to inform you happily that r...
^
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'managed'.
Suggestion: managed
...inform you happily that recently I have manage to join a company as marketing executiv...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...rolled for in your institute. I am very much kin to finish the English course with y...
^^^^
Line 11, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ward for you response. Your Sincerely MD Rahaman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55963302752 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5967030562 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4113761872 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3636363636 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25169947733 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094814060639 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611971084347 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154226924644 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700716837187 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.