You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days You hadn t seen each other for a long time say how you felt about the visit refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him her invite your friend to visit you You should wr

Essay topics:

You have recently been to stay with an old friend for a few days. You hadn't seen each other for a long time.
• say how you felt about the visit
• refer to something enjoyable that you did while staying with him/her
• invite your friend to visit you
You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Annie,

How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. It was really one of the best vacations I ever had!

Thank you for being a wonderful host and an amazing guide too. It was good to see you after a long time, and able to spend time with you, spending hours talking about our school days, the experiences and memories of childhood.

It was really a refreshing experience to see a new place and where you live. I particularly enjoyed our trip to the Al ain National Park and appreciated the opportunity to see so many rare birds and animals.

Next month, we’ll be celebrating our wedding anniversary and we would be delighted if you could come over to celebrate it with us. There are plenty of places you would like to see. Of course, you have to stay at our house. There is plenty of room and we’ll pick you from the airport. I really hope you can make it.

Take care and write back soon.
Saira

Votes
Average: 6.4 (42 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, of course, talking about

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46783625731 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39754670959 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7133694876 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334964216469 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132520898257 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734649668861 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162376989285 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110405865984 0.0580467560999 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.