You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter,
• explain why you would like the job
• give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
• say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement that I have come across in Outlook, Sydney edition.
I have recently completed my Masters in Education and pursuing and learning to paint from a reputed artist in the nearby town. As I am bound to stay for atleast half a year, I would like to put my education to use and freelance to keep myself occupied for rest of my stint here.
To outline the strengths, I have been raised in a large family with all my cousins and uncles living under one roof. I have experience in maneuvering myself around family members and kids. In 2 years of my stint as a Tutor for primary class students, I was awarded as the most likeable teacher.
In Australia, my favorite pass time is to watch the Australian rugby team in action, also I have recently developed a fascination for fishing and exploring various fishes.
I have also attached my CV encapsulating my academic and professional experience. Hope you find my application suitable. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Mihira Muppidi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75132275132 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79455252402 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640211640212 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2294426158 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6363636364 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191185056446 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697902579451 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363062051043 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100408128926 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209453118848 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.