You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter,
Describe the situation
Explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
Say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir Accomodation Officer,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of spirit. I am writing today with regard to the issue that I am having with my roommate.
I am a senior student taking up Academic English and I am currently staying at a twin room in the Hall of Residence Building II. Unfortunately, the person that I am sharing this accomodation with is a lead singer in a band. For the past 2 weeks, her band have been rehearsing in the vacant room next to ours for the upcoming school activity. Because of the noise that they are making, I have been having a hard time trying to study for the finals and finish my papers which is already due in 2 weeks.
If you would permit, I would like to request to transferred to a single accomodation as soon as there is an available room. As mentioned above, I am in my last semester, and lacking hours of sleep because of the unnecessary noises would not help me complete all of my requirements in time.
Hoping for you kind consideration and looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Joyce Jabonero
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53299492386 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70897683447 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619289340102 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7062329065 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188225707872 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751463803787 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659311616228 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105655230349 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822154823686 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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