You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is John Paul and I live in he student hall. I am writing this letter to describe a problem which I am having at my residence.
I am a final year student of Business Administration Program and I have been allotted a room with another student for the last three months. She is in class first year. Our routine as well as way of living is significantly different from each other that I really find it difficult to manage to study.
The main problem is that she is fond of listening to music and plays song on mobile and sometimes on radio in a loud volume. Another issue is that her friends visit her in the room quite often. They do parties in the room and also make a noise. In such situation, it often becomes almost impossible for me to study with concentration.
I could not take the risk of sharing room with any other student till my exams are over, therefore, I would like to request you to assign me a single room so that I could focus on my studies. I shall be thankful to you for your kind attention to this problem.
I look forward to hearing from you about the issue.
Yours faithfully,
John Paul.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in the student'?
Suggestion: in the student
...adam, My name is John Paul and I live in he student hall. I am writing this letter to descr...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your kind attention to this problem. I look forward to hearing from you about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37037037037 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47059177752 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9617798513 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6153846154 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6153846154 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287206523673 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787549542806 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538939982755 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135399475276 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513535371381 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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