You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.

Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that I have forgotten some important documents while my recent visit to your reputable hotel for a business meeting with one of my clients.

The papers must have been left in the room where we had the meeting. I could only assume that it either was dropped beneath the table or had been covered under one of the table sheets. My bag had many files, but it did not include those important documents.

I do not have another copy from those papers and it was original, therefore, those papers are so important. It will be very difficult to issue those papers again from the local authorities. The procedure of issuing an original document may take two consecutive months.

The booking reference number of that meeting is WDCRX, and I would request if you could be able to help me find those important papers. You can retrieve the footage from the security cameras at the meeting room.

I look forward to receiving my papers as soon as possible.

Yours faithfully,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75555555556 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45085019262 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4571370801 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8181818182 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227353268549 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713415680696 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732237130871 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113487222122 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878186075222 0.0580467560999 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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