You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter,
• Say what the participants liked about the hotel
• Explain why they were unhappy about the food
• Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the future
Dear Sam,
I hope you are doing well at your end. I received your letter last week and I am writing you back to tell you about a job opening available in my nation in a start-up entity.
As we share the same professional backgrounds, it was not a much of typical task to find a relevant employment for you. The job title is language interpreter. Basically, you will be dealing with clients whose official language is French. You would be required to give response through email to all the customers in the same medium. It would be a non-voice process, but at times, you would be asked to deal some of them through telephonic calls.
Back in college, I remember you had a pretty good fluency with this language. Also your experience of narrating English plays to the European audience has helped you gain a good hand at it. Therefore, in my opinion you are best suited for this job as translating mails to your boss and replying back to their clients would not take much of your efforts.
The organization has just opened last year. The process of hiring is not much complex yet. I am attaching a form with the letter in which you need to fill in your personal details and staple a copy of your resume along with it. There is a postal address at the end of this letter at which you should post it in an envelope.
I wish you get this job in India soon. We will then be able to share some happy time again.
Yours friendly,
Udita
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pretty good fluency with this language. Also your experience of narrating English pl...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47191011236 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41767189637 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4444169825 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.2352941176 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165519684865 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518332220407 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422118257227 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923455905028 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409415374035 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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