You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter:
– say what the participants liked about the hotel
– explain why they were unhappy about the food
– suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am, Bibhu Kalita - an employee of Tata Motors Pvt. Ltd, writing to you on behalf of my company to let you know about the likes and dislikes of the hotel. The meeting, which was organised in the conference hall, was end as per our expectation. All participants loved the ambience of the room, supporting staff behaviours and the state-of-arts facilities.
However, every participant showed discontent about the food, served during lunch time, which was served late and cold as well. In addition, food items were limited, not as per the decided menu especially the chicken items.
I can understand the rush on that day, as we were 150 participants, but it was informed well in advanced. Had you been hired some temporary supporting stuff, this issue could have been managed in proper way. Please do make changes in food menu after consulting with concern client only.
Hope you will look into my suggestions seriously in the future, and hope we will get better service in the next event!
Yours faithfully,
Bibhu Kalita
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99428571429 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64025476951 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.714285714286 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.3240219516 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205838354309 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683022161418 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505661147615 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104034922209 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660327621695 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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