You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter :
1) Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college.
2) Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her.
3) Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her.
Dear Jakir,
I've received your letter last night after coming back from my office and I'd say you must throw a party as you've got the chance at Westwood College. Anyway, congratulations on your brilliant success!
In your letter, you've expressed a dilemma on going to the college for masters degree, rather you've shown a little interest on getting a job. Well, if you ask me, I'd suggest to postpone your study plan and start looking for a job more seriously. Let me explain it more clearly.
First of all, you had a plan to do your masters degree on Cyber Security, but unfortunately, you have got Robotics which you don't like. Why should you spend your next two years for a boring subject that you don't like? Rather, you should try to get a job that matches your interests. This will match with your passion and you can get both experience and some financial back-up. Maybe one or two years later, you can enroll for diploma courses on your dream subjects. I'll simply recommend you to stick to indeed.com where you can have a lots of job opening for IT firms.
Anyway, I must get off now. I'll call you next weekend during my free time and will talk more on these issues. Till then, take care.
Bye for now.
Sam.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, look, may, so, then, well, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.48453608247 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54504504505 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27463205332 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653153153153 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5286724226 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320771306622 0.216113520407 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105668487101 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731954935755 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169916200182 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716023895121 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.