You recently travelled on the local bus service in your town. You think the driver drove badly and was rude to the passengers. Write a letter to the manager of the local bus service. In your letter
introduce yourself and say when the incident happened
describe what you saw and heard
say what you would like the bus company to do about it
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Ricky Tran, I have been using your bus service in this town for a while. However, today, I am writing this letter to bring to your attention to a bad behavior bus driver.
It happened last day in the afternoon when I took a bus to travel back to my home from work. The driver was driving over speed limited, and he even shouted at other passengers when they told him to drive more carefully.
I suggest that you should have suitable action with this driver to make sure he will not relapse his fault in the future. As his action not only can cause an accident on the street but also may affect your company image. If you need further information about this incident, please contact me back through this letter address, or my phone number 3347287182.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Ricky Tran
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 709.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54487179487 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25825791194 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730769230769 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 212.4 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4069812465 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7777777778 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246209935825 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965024893777 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539829337538 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13398244478 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694273538097 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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