You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,
• Explain why you were at the restaurant
• Describe the problems
• Write about the action you want the manager to take.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I was recently a guest at your “SKYY” restaurant for celebrating my sisters birthday. I would like to express my dissatisfaction during my visit.
Let me explain in more detail. We had organised my sisters birthday at your restaurant. We always prefer to dine-in that restaurant because of delicious food and courteous service offered by your staff. As we had already informed prior about the menu, which needs to be served and a chocolate cake.
When we entered into the restaurant, the hostess welcomed us with a cheerful smile and we were sitted at our reserved table. We asked server for the cake which we ordered but he was unable to trace the order. After half an hour with the coordination of supervisor, they arranged a half kg cake, which was soggy and chunks of ice found in middle of the cake. We ordered sea food platter. Which was dry and overcooked.
I would request you to brief the staff about the coordination and requests made by the guest. I would also like to meet you in personal as , I am planning to organise delegate meeting at your restaurant and to avoid any problems with service and meals.
I hope you would look into this matter and will be waiting for your positive response.
Best regards,
Saurabh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...uld also like to meet you in personal as , I am planning to organise delegate meet...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d any problems with service and meals. I hope you would look into this matter an...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73755656109 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71705274495 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619909502262 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8511636041 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.26666666667 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176805088015 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053804138309 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574242337345 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101255712164 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432521355487 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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