A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community.
Do you support or oppose the factory establishment?
Explain your position.
To meet the demands of the population with regards to fashion , food and other basic necessities , industries are increasing at a faster rate. While there are many benefits after setting up a factory in our area there are also some drawbacks to consider. In this essay, I will discuss some of the problems associated with it and will propose my opinion in latter view.
Firstly, introducing a factory in our vicinity will be beneficial as the products which are produced might get us at a cheaper rate than market price due to less transportation cost and interference of middle men. Secondly, new factory creates lot of job vacancies and employment opportunities. People could also start small scale business around the factory. Lastly, it could also help to promote tourism as its products may attract more tourists. For example, Many people from Gujarat encourage tourists to visit Amul factory which is located at Anand, to demonstarte how the milk products are prepared in the factory.
On the flip side, there are also disadvantages which are associated with it. Building new manufacturing plant might lead to increase in pollution. There could be air, water and sound pollution which could affect people’s health. The land required for the establishment of the factory might affect deforestation or seize the barren land which could lead to long run consequences. There could be traffic congestion seen in our community, as the vehicles will be passing for carrying goods to and fro from the factory. More construction would be started in our area as the people will prefer to stay near their work place to avoid commuting from longer distance and the locality might get congested.
To sum up, I oppose the idea as I feel there are more dangers than benefits after establishment of the factory.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...f the population with regards to fashion , food and other basic necessities , indu...
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Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...ith regards to fashion , food and other basic necessities , industries are increasing at a faster...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...shion , food and other basic necessities , industries are increasing at a faster r...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...consider. In this essay, I will discuss some of the problems associated with it and will pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81657116204 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573333333333 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2719565333 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.066666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0964768776108 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346364348206 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.027806394746 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588042019513 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00561335583902 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.