You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
» explain why you were at the restaurant
» describe the problems
» write about the action you want the manager to take
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with a dissatisfaction. The meal served at your restaurant was not up to our expectations. We had visited your restaurant on 29th may as we were celebrating our wedding anniversary.
Knowing that your restaurant is open till late hours, we thought of eating our dinner there after a hectic day out. Our stomach were growling because of hunger. So we thought to order something healthy and nutritious. On ordering a fresh vegetable pasta and broccoli soup, we expected our taste buds to be satisfied. Unfortunately, the food served was cold and tasteless. Also, to my notice vegetables were not cooked well and served raw. We had spoken to the on duty staff about the problem. However, no action was taken and we were advised to get in touch with you.
Requesting you to please look into the matter. Also we expect an apology letter from the chef and his team for ruining our dinner. Looking forward for your positive response.
Yours faithfully,
Jeshika Nayak.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
... hours, we thought of eating our dinner there after a hectic day out. Our stomach were grow...
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Line 6, column 48, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing you to please look into the matter. Also we expect an apology letter from the ch...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91812865497 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78887901761 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.0599184042 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.0666666667 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.4 16.8248392259 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21310535424 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712620357176 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505884816976 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156275208228 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561995331926 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.07 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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