You want a book that you cannot find. Later you found it and it is available in a bookstore in another city. Write a letter to the manager of bookstore.
In your letter, you should:
• give details of book
• say why you need this book
• tell how you will pay for it.
Dear Concern,
My name is Minal Kapadia and I am writing this letter to enquire about the book “The Economic Concern” by JK Rowling. Since this book is in limited edition, I have been unable to get my hands on one of the copies. One of my friend, happened to inform me that your store has the book in stock. I happened to go on your website and found that there is only one copy left.
To give you a brief, I am pursuing my Masters in Economics and as a part of curriculum I need to submit a project on the current economic outlook of the world. I read the synopsis of the above mentioned booked and it happens to cover the current economic health of the world. Hence, I would like to purchase this book.
I am aware that your store does not have an option for buying book online. However, if you can share your bank account details, I would right away transfer the money as per the retail price. Additionally, I will also add the courier cost to the total amount. Post receiving the money, you can send across the book at my residential address (enclosed below).
Will await your bank account details.
Yours Sincerely,
Minal Kapadia
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...und that there is only one copy left. To give you a brief, I am pursuing my Ma...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5355450237 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38314650315 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601895734597 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5742263421 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6153846154 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61538461538 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260922004566 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814266158878 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421281759801 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138121775335 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555745539285 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.