You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager, in your letter:
Describe the training course you want to do
Explain what the company could do to help you
Say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you regarding the training on 'Business Management' I have seen the advertisement on a technical website. The training will be conducted by the University of Texas on 7th March 2013 for two days, and they are inviting the CEO and Managing Director of ABC firm as the key speaker. The training module included some of the aspects: marketing strategy, removal and mitigation of risk, resource management et cetera.
The requisite for training entry is to get a referral letter from current company manager. In addition, I need to take two days off in order to attend the training as this is two full-day workshop.
This training could be helpful for my career growth, as I can eligible to apply for promotion after this training module. Moreover, this will be helpful to our organization to improve our marketing strategy and risk management.
I am looking forward to hearing back from you with the approval of leaves and referral letter.
Yours sincerely,
pallavi
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y speaker. The training module included some of the aspects: marketing strategy, removal an...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of risk, resource management et cetera. The requisite for training entry is to g...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...risk, resource management et cetera. The requisite for training entry is to get ...
^^^
Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...om current company manager. In addition, I need to take two days off in order to ...
^^
Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'workshop' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'workshops'.
Suggestion: workshops
...nd the training as this is two full-day workshop. This training could be helpful for m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03571428571 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78082599191 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0349637513 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286837521461 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108403028748 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624986251712 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14058756246 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246317980783 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.