You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.

Essay topics:

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.

Dear Sir,

I am wiring this letter to inform you that I am going to attend a training course in the institute Sun Microsystems.

I have been working as a developer for last few years in this organization. Recently, I noticed a training session on Software testing, additionally they are providing hands-on experience in mobile automation for ios and android apps. This is the essential technology used by our competitors and this tool has to followed and inclined to project deliverables to our client. This is the weekend course and it will not affect our work. Also, I’m requesting approval to proceed and reimbursement from the company. Because our organization will gain a big profit in terms of billing for our project by using the tools learnt from the session. Secondly, this tool can replace the efforts of 4 to 5 employee. Moreover, in a short span of time following the modern approach will give us test report usually it takes 4 days whereas this offers the results in a day. Let me know if you need more details.

Looking forward for your reply.

Yours Sincerely,

Sreenivasan.M

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Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 699, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'employee' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'employees'.
Suggestion: employees
... tool can replace the efforts of 4 to 5 employee. Moreover, in a short span of time foll...
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Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...reply. Yours Sincerely, Sreenivasan.M
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93048128342 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87331532838 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0852923031 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235188369959 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084002963636 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590627748701 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160748972746 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430866042261 0.0580467560999 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.