The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.Do you agree or disagree?

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Do you agree or disagree?

In this era of technology development people are more inclined to do shopping through online. Some people say that local shops in urban and rural will be closed soon because of the rapid usage of online market. However, several people say that this will not affect the buyers to buy goods from direct reputed centers. I completely agree with the latter statement and this essay will discuss my views with valid arguments and examples.

First and foremost, many young people say buying the products through online is the sign of modernization. Additionally, youngster feel that there are some sites which provides plethora of products in one place compare to nearby shops, furthermore the price is moderate and cheap during the year-end sales. Moreover, due to hectic schedule in work and unavailability of shopping center near to the office premise current generation adapted to buy through online. To prove that, Standford University had done many surveys on purchasing the items through website and the result shows that 70% people prefer to buy because of offers and irrefutable service like door step delivery.

On the other hand, there are people like to buy products in person by visiting the shopping centers. Typically, they emphasize in quality and liberty to check the product before money transaction. Furthermore, they believe that this shop will not sell wrong products to their popular and trust-worthy reputation. People can be made aware of well-known shop by road shows and campaign to attract people to visit. To exemplify, daily commercial on newspaper or daily advertisement on television will help to get register in people mind.

To conclude, buying the goods through popular websites is the latest trend in the society whereas local shops provides quality products and it offers immense satisfaction to the consumers.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66547845302 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587837837838 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9328518023 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64285714286 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156429757733 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586265734086 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404479675941 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955731706841 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428151518967 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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