Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips

Essay topics:

Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

• say why a driving licence is advantageous

• recommend a driving school

• give any extra guidance/tips

Dear Asiya,

I'm very excited that you finally would like to learn to drive. I'd give you some valuable advice on that.

First of all, driving licence is so helpful in many ways, despite of some accidental risk if you drive carelessly. You can have your own transportation vehicle as it saves you lots of time. Plus, it can be significantly useful when you are travelling to different country, you don't need to rely on public transportation.

If you are concerned about where to take driving classes. I would recommend you going in Alex Driving School which has well reputed driving instructors, in fact, I've also learned driving from there.

There are certain things you should keep in mind. In a start, Don't feel nervous. It's pretty easy and straightforward process. Just always stay focused and you'll do good.

I wish you the best on your driving lessons.

Lots of love,
Kaushik

Votes
Average: 6.1 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Asiya, Im very excited that you finally would lik...
^^
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...u finally would like to learn to drive. Id give you some valuable advice on that. ...
^^
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re travelling to different country, you dont need to rely on public transportation. ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed to rely on public transportation. If you are concerned about where to take d...
^^
Line 8, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...l reputed driving instructors, in fact, Ive also learned driving from there. The...
^^^
Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... instructors, in fact, Ive also learned driving from there. There are certain things...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...gs you should keep in mind. In a start, Dont feel nervous. Its pretty easy and strai...
^^^^
Line 10, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...d process. Just always stay focused and youll do good. I wish you the best on your...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, well, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66124723431 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736842105263 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9836042355 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6923076923 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244609012775 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846971051787 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898703591495 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159121475788 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917419859773 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Asiya, Im very excited that you finally would lik...
^^
Line 4, column 64, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...u finally would like to learn to drive. Id give you some valuable advice on that. ...
^^
Line 6, column 278, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...re travelling to different country, you dont need to rely on public transportation. ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed to rely on public transportation. If you are concerned about where to take d...
^^
Line 8, column 163, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...l reputed driving instructors, in fact, Ive also learned driving from there. The...
^^^
Line 8, column 180, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
... instructors, in fact, Ive also learned driving from there. There are certain things...
^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 63, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...gs you should keep in mind. In a start, Dont feel nervous. Its pretty easy and strai...
^^^^
Line 10, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...d process. Just always stay focused and youll do good. I wish you the best on your...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, well, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66124723431 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736842105263 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9836042355 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6923076923 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244609012775 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846971051787 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898703591495 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159121475788 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917419859773 0.0580467560999 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.