Your local council is considering closing a sports & leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
• Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
• Explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
• Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre is closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to the decision of town council for closing sports and leisure club. I understand that the council has decided this step to cut the costs of running the centre but there are many social aspects attached to this decision.
I will narrate how myself and my age-fellows are benefitting from the club. Every evening, we are playing basketball in the designated area which keeps us refresh after the hectic routine. We also organize matches over the weekend to keep us fit. This weekly competition is quite popular and as a result, our family members also come to witness the competition.
This centre serves as a social gathering place for elders, who not only watch different competitions but also take part in the routine walk, swimming and do gym. I believe because this centre, the social bond of the town dwellers is strengthened and most importantly, everybody is actively involved in some activity.
I’m afraid that if the centre is discontinued, many young and older people will lose an opportunity of free sports facilities. The youth might indulge in unhealthy practices and families would left socially isolated.
Thanking you for your kind consideration
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to the decision of town council for closin...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l aspects attached to this decision. I will narrate how myself and my age-fell...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
... unhealthy practices and families would left socially isolated. Thanking you for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15763546798 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73800353364 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694581280788 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1149234833 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1818181818 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157405731046 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542001425947 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610700017123 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840670098663 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566357291348 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.