Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letterexplain the reasons for the noiseapologizedescribe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise

apologize

describe what action you will take

Dear Mr. Smith,

I received your letter this weekend where you mentioned your disappointment regarding the disturbance faced by your family because of the construction work going at my home. As, you were not able to sleep properly due to the loud construction noises. I want to finish it as soon as possible to avoid any kind of mishappening or damage as a precaution before extreme weather conditions in the coming days. Please accept my profuse apology due to the inconvenience. I will assure you that this will not happen again as I always want to be a good neighbour.

The construction is almost done now and I already given strict instructions to the contractor to only working in the regular business hour. Also, I hope you will understand the situation and request you to cooperate as the renovation was necessary for the durability of my dwelling.

Yours sincerely

Peter Evans

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...the construction work going at my home. As, you were not able to sleep properly du...
^^
Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly due to the loud construction noises. I want to finish it as soon as possible ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours sincerely Peter Evans
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, regarding, so, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03973509934 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97248466815 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9505473985 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257449648007 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953019766894 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938433909449 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160661891705 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692661426166 0.0580467560999 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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