(2) Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that the finest way to cope with an uncomfortable situation is to admit it, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others believe that making an effort to overcome is preferable. From my perspective, I agree with the latter, for it will improve the quality of one’s life and make them more persistent.
Some people realize that it is best to accept a dreadful situation. For example, according to a New York Times article, 85 percent of the office workers feel bored with their profession and wish to embark on new career. However, current occupation assures average salary so that they can look after their family and pay bills. Although having no interest in what they are doing, accepting and living with boredom is a choice since it is safer than quitting present job and changing for another one. If they try to do so, ending up in a worse scenario than their current status may happen.
On the other hand, some people consider that they should work to address the problems. In order to lead a joyful life, they must change the difficult condition. For instance, a student comes from a low-income family attempts to pay school fees on their own by doing part-time jobs and studying diligently to gain scholarships. These people have faith in their ability and show that while others have given up, they still fight for their dreams and crave for finer things.
I agree that everyone should aim to improve the unpleasant situation. For one thing, it will raise the quality of their life. To achieve a superior status, they need to do their best. Moreover, they can become more persistent. That trying to figure out how to handle not circumventing a problem is the action they will carry out.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why people choose to live in a poor condition and struggle to change it, but I assume that it is better not to live in them. Instead, everybody should step out of their comfort zone and resolve the difficulties in life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, for one thing, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78735632184 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52896256819 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594827586207 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9984798043 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6842105263 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179030841952 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581185582554 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736590179357 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998374374582 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644048075046 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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