Anyone can post information on the internet. Some people say most of what we read on the Internet is inaccurate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is undeniable fact that after the development of the internet, it brings more ups and down in every person's lives. Freedom of broadcasting on the internet has enabled each individual to express their views. Although some of the information may be wrong argued by many people, I believe that most of the information correct due to privacy and advancement in internet technology.
To begin with, my first argument is that only if the information is correct, it can enjoy a lasting attraction to readers. With an expectation to have more readers, the author will be encouraged to post correct and authoritative articles which will, in turn, attract more and more visitors to the blog of the author. Otherwise, when the audience comes to know they are being cheated, then they will stop visiting the blog or website.
Another point to consider that most websites are now survised and monitored under the teams of cybersecurity. In more detail, many authors steal information and contents of another blogger and this plagiarism is considered an offence on the internet. Therefore, they have a fear of cybercrime and also loss of their website or blog due to privacy concern. Consequently, it discourages people to post wrong and misleading information.
Admittedly, some false, misleading or incorrect information do exist, due to insufficient knowledge of the author or blogger. This is to say that earlier when the news was broadcast on news networks and another information was shared by prestigious reference books; however, the current publishers, which is an average user with a mobile phone and internet network, has no moral values and sensitivity.
To conclude, most of the information on the internet is worth our trust. With the rise of people’s awareness of its accuracy, the more correct information will be there awaiting us in the future. Although, some contradict factor of the author such as limited knowledge can be avoided.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...vidual to express their views. Although some of the information may be wrong argued by many...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17981072555 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95960255453 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558359621451 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3354966423 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.466666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1333333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.86666666667 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195734698475 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071184732993 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504716648855 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117254042729 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050446794383 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.