The birth rate in most developed countries is predicted to begin to fall over the next 50 years. By 2030 it is estimated that over one third of the population in most developed countries will be aged 65 and over.
What effects will these predictions have on developed countries if they prove true? What can be done to deal with this situation?
Nowadays, the decrease in population size in most developed countries is one of the most serious concern which just can be ranked below the fear of the explosion in nuclear weapons. It is the reason why this trend make up the negative impact on remaining stabilize society. On coming up against this problem, the governments must bring out lots of solutions .
These countries will have to cope with more serious things if they carry on letting the decrease in the birth rate go further. First of all, it leads to the lacking of prospective labor intensive being the key factor of deciding sociology-economic development. Secondly, the inhabitants degradation plays a role in the shortage of those who carry on family name.
There are many new directions should be proposed to tackle this trend. In many countries, authority figures ought to mobilize necessary resources and talk to couples in child-bearing years about the great of importance when they start to have pregnancy. Moreover they also are able to hold the negotiation of child-bearing with the present of family plan experts in order to carry out population advocacy.
To sum up, because of the interrelationship between population and development, the government are making effort to check the population size.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17874396135 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0423538847 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2731807068 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148295156973 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489190328 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694762286318 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781915267587 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435005175324 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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