Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.
How true do you think this statement?
What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?
Nowadays, what is the reason for increasing the traffic jam in major cities, it resulted due to the rate of car ownership, which is rapidly raised up over the last thirty years. So, this essay will explain about the arguments of reason behind traffic jam and how it will reduce by encouraging people with sort of solutions.
first of all, in this competitive era, car companies provide attractive offers in terms of discounts on price of car and many more. Therefore, people was attracting towards the car ownership and resulted the car population in major metro cities. In addition to this, there are also certain reasons like improving the level of living and many more, which affected the traffic jam. according to the survey, in 1990 to 2010, in the London city, traffic jam was raised up to 60% because of increasing rate of the car ownership day-to-day.
On the other hand, to tackle this situation, government would take some steps towards discouragement of car ownership. Firstly, government would implement some taxes on the price of car. Thus, people will think first, while they will buying the car. Secondly, government would launch the public transport with good interior facility. Hence for this, citizens will attract towards the public transport instead of their own cars. according to the report of ministry of road and transport, 35% of people do not use their own cars for daily transport activities. As a result of this, traffic jam reduced by 15%.
To conclude this topic, it is quiet obvious that the traffic jam would be reduced by applying the certain solution like reducing car ownership and using more and more public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, sort of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9928057554 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53825347582 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55035971223 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7223676189 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338624555684 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120853366547 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464797337516 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205226044882 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440737763571 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.