Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
class="MsoHeader" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">class="it">it class="is">is admitted class="that">that class="children">children class="is">is the future of the country. Therefore, taking care of class="children">children has class="been">been very crucial to class="our">our community. Due to this reason, many people claim class="that">that all mothers and fathers must enrol in a parenting course to gain the best childcare skills. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.
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class="MsoHeader" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">First of all, this opinion seems to be impractical. In the period od industrialization and modernization, many adults suffer from a large amount of class="work">work and pressure in their workplace and daily lives. Hence, they class="have">have little free time class="so">so class="most">most of people class="will">will choose to rest and relax their mind after a tiring working day instead of continuing go to a childcare class. Apart from class="that">that, each family has their own standpoints and expectations. In other words, class="it">it class="is">is impossible to create a course class="that">that class="is">is suitable for everyone.
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class="MsoHeader" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">The other side of the coin class="is">is class="that">that class="it">it class="is">is unnecessary. From the past until now, class="most">most of parents class="have">have class="been">been educating their class="children">children without any extra classes about parenting. this means class="that">that, class="our">our class="children">children are still developing healthily and obediently even though their parents didn’t take any terms before. Moms and dads can learn from family members or absorb advices and experiences from friend and also can read on the internet which provides you with a huge source of information class="that">that you want to know. Moreover, the cost of this training course class="is">is high class="so">so not everyone class="is">is able to afford the service. Perhaps class="that">that we learn from reality or by instinct, trial and error would be better than in a class with only knowledge and quite expensive.
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class="MsoHeader" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0.0001pt; font-size: medium; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif;">In conclusion, parenting lessons might be considered as a good idea but I believe this method class="will">will not be workable and less attractive to the parents
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3125.0 1615.20841683 193% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 8.51498637602 5.12529762239 166% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.83308846544 2.80592935109 279% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542234332425 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 831.6 506.74238477 164% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 97.1657732949 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.3125 106.682146367 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0310291105467 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287218954558 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0252294126882 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0174389297647 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173309321072 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.1 13.0946893788 230% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.07 50.2224549098 -20% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 11.3001002004 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 32.37 12.4159519038 261% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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