Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is admitted that children are the future of the country. Therefore, taking care of children has been very crucial to our community. Due to this reason, many people claim that all mothers and fathers must enroll in a parenting course to gain the best childcare skills. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this viewpoint.
First of all, this opinion seems to be impractical. In the period of industrialization and modernization, many adults suffer from a large amount of work and pressure in their workplace and daily lives. Hence, they have little free time so most parents will choose to rest and relax their mind after a tiring working day instead of continuing to go to a childcare class. Apart from that, each family has their different standpoints and expectations. In other words, it is impossible to create a course that is suitable for everyone.
The other side of the coin is that it is unnecessary. From the past until now, most parents have been educating their children without any extra classes about parenting. This means that our children are still developing healthily and obediently even though their parents didn’t take any terms before. Moms and dads can learn from family members or absorb hints and experiences from friends and also can read on the internet which provides you with a huge source of information that you want to know. Moreover, the cost of this training course is high so not everyone can afford the service. Perhaps that we learn from reality or by instinct, trial and error would be better than in a class with only knowledge and quite expensive.
In conclusion, parenting lessons might be considered as a good idea but I believe this method will not be workable and less attractive to the parents
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95302013423 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70649806038 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1318603024 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156259219323 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484920976675 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319040957206 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094457443392 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511315284833 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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