Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Nowadays, it is <span class="hiddenspellerror">possiblle</span> for people to buy the same products in all over the world so that it seemed like every countries have a lot of things in common. Some people believe that it is has some disadvantages, however I convinced that it is a positive development. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">It <span class="hiddengrammarerror">can be</span> clearly seen that if people can buy the stuff from anywhere in the world, the world economy will develop <span class="hiddenspellerror">significantly</span>. Due to <span class="hiddengrammarerror">the revolution of</span> internet connect people in the world together and make it easier for people to do online shopping, it means we can buy stuff from another countries without travelling and a person who live in <span class="hiddenspellerror">foreign</span> can do the same thing. As a result, there are more international branches appear in a countries and <span class="hiddensuggestion">contribute</span> to raise of economy because every <span class="hiddenspellerror">companies</span> can extend their markets and introduce their products to many kinds of people not only in national residents but also international residents. <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">Another strong reason is tourists or migrant workers may find it more comfortable when they come to a stranger country. Those people will find many similar things in <span class="hiddenspellerror">comparison</span> with their countries <span class="hiddensuggestion">in order to</span> start a new life or have a better trip such as some products from their hometown will make them more <span class="hiddenspellerror">convinient</span> in daily life. Moreover, if people can see the same thing in a country that they used to have in their local area, they <span class="hiddenspellerror">will</span> have motivated to move to that country to work or book a tour for their vacation. This benefit lead to the sharp development of tourism and labour market in the world. </span></p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 14.5pt; line-height: 107%; font-family: "Lucida Sans Unicode", sans-serif; background-image: initial; background-position: initial; background-size: initial; background-repeat: initial; background-attachment: initial; background-origin: initial; background-clip: initial;">In conclusion, even have some drawbacks, it is impossible to deny the merits of this development and <span class="hiddengrammarerror">i</span> strongly recommend that we need to find some effective solutions to make this trend be popular in every countries while their tradition culture or local products have <span class="hiddengrammarerror">to be</span> protect. </span></p>
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3480.0 1615.20841683 215% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 8.11188811189 5.12529762239 158% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.83553819129 2.80592935109 315% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.463869463869 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 953.1 506.74238477 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.2 1.60771543086 137% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.238382934 49.4020404114 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 348.0 106.682146367 326% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 42.9 20.7667163134 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860582270543 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066929725256 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313908786636 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860582270543 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.2 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -21.91 50.2224549098 -44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.8 11.3001002004 237% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 30.65 12.4159519038 247% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 9.78957915832 260% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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