Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
Bicycle is considered the transport wich enables the environment to become greener and is used in almost all the countries around the world. However, it is not popular as some other forms of transport in some places due to several reasons and the solutions to this problem will be mentioned below.
To begin with, the main reason which makes cycling less common is that it is not suitable for long-distanced travelling. Cycling may take us a lot of time, unlike other vehicles, which can help us get to the destinations that we want to come without wasting time and strength. In addition, bicycle is simply designed. Nowadays, people consider fashion to be one of the top criteria in choosing a transport. Some think that the shape of bicycle doesn't fit with their clothes and therefore they choose car or motorbike instead.
There are several solutions which can be made to increase the amount of bicycle's users. Firstly, the government should encourage people to use bicycle by telling them the benefits of cycling to the environment. Secondly, they should pass a law of only allow bicycle used in come special routes, which means people cannot use other means of transport in these areas. Finally, if the cost of buying cars or motorbikes is higher, people will have to think of other transports which is cheaper that they can afford. As a result, more and more commuters list bicycle to be their second choice, and this leads to a remarkable increase in bicycle's usage.
In conclusion, cycling plays an essential part in protecting the environment. Although it may have some disadvantages, the benefits that cycling brings still outweight it. In order to make our planet become greener, it is the responsibility and awareness of everyone in reducing the number of cars or motorbikes on the streets and replace them by bicycle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'transport'.
Suggestion: transport
... be one of the top criteria in choosing a transport. Some think that the shape of bicycle d...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...t. Some think that the shape of bicycle doesnt fit with their clothes and therefore th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94498381877 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7079006412 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556634304207 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4999847793 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.866666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181573065773 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553044544109 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470631648917 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106371984215 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040954628733 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.