With divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted that families today are not as close as they used to be.
Nowadays, divorce is the common trend of every family. Some people believe that many problems on the family may occur to divorce. Unhealthy marital relationship between husband and wife can break marriage. This essay will give some reason of divorce and solutions to prevent it.
First of all, it is common for spouses to want to avoid conversation they fear will cause them or their spouse pain which can’t solve marital problems if no talking and listening. Thus, the lack of finances can cause the divorce. When the family faces serious financial problem, it become huge conflict on solving this financial problem. On the other hand, spouses not having a shared vision of success between husband and wife. This also can occur conflict in difference of each life visions and forcing spouse to divorce. Additionally, intimacy in the spouse disappear because of misunderstanding what husband and wife really want. This impact to seriously intimately estranged and can lead to divorce as couples begin to feel unloved and unappreciated.
Divorce and family breakdown can also be prevent with. Honouring and respecting in each other with communicating and intimating regularly are some way to make marital relationship more strength. Communication involves talking about the bad things and coming together to develop a plan of action for solving marital problems. Again, sharing financial expectations and budgets is the key to remain healthy spouse relationship by handling money together. There are no doubt several ways in which these could be accomplished.
In conclusion, divorce rate is certainly increasing and the common trend. Divorce can be and is avoided by those willing to work hard at marriage, those who know how to effectively communicate and those whose expectations are realistic.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, really, so, thus, in conclusion, no doubt, talking about, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84155073646 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60350877193 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4410235826 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4444444444 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14860586328 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530257004406 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843369379558 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966396383564 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349992994453 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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