The gap between the rich and the poor people is increasingly widespread, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address the problem.
It is undisputed that, the disparity between the wealthy person and the poor has enormously raised nowadays. Presently, people opine that it has a lot of negative impacts on the society as a whole. Here, this essay intends to discuss about the possible negative outcomes that will arise on the society and recommend some solution methods to tackle this issue.
This phenomena creates adverse impacts on people and on the nation too. First and the foremost, many crimes like robbery, prostitution, stealing and soon will be on top of the table. To demonstrate, poor people would be deprived from proper food, education, house et.cetera. which probably propel them to act such a illegal crimes to meet their needs. Besides that, this issue directly affect on the economic condition of the nation and the graph of economic will follow the downward trend. The main reason of this situation is that impoverished people who occupy a proportion of the population do not have money to buy companies' products. So, the inequality between the rich and the poor has make the condition of people and nation more worse.
What is needed to combat this problem is to make a definite rule. To be specific, government should reduce the tax rate that has to be paid by disadvantages. What is more, government should make the provision to provide free quality education to the children from the poor background family. Due to which, children become able to do some high paid job which certainly rise the economic condition and life style of a poor family.
To recapitulate, undeniably, the difference between the prosperous poor and the poor people is desperately is rising day by day. But, it could be solve, if the government make a certain rule regarding tax payment by poor people and should provide free facilities that are needed in their daily life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: These
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Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, regarding, so, as to, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95483870968 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63342004713 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538709677419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3206700918 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309423204501 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943857634285 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698033939162 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17047889128 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394013376891 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.