Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Railway has given prominent direction to travelling as it made moving of people easy to far places. I partially agree with the statement that money should be spent on railway projects and not roads as roads maintenance is also important and will discuss my view points in upcoming paragraph.

To start with the main point that comes in my is taking care of railway is significant by spending on it as railway travellers counting is in big number eventually this will give comfort to people and that could happen with increase count of train. For instance, on daily basis people in lac travel through rail there should be more count of train for the metro cities. Moreover, there is a need of maintaining station as well with proper cleaning, sitting facilities, enquiry desk, clean food stalls.

Explaining rest with the view of road funding is also mandatory for protection of folks because if government does not pay heed on it then this might lead to threatening to the lives of people as it is the way of transporting of short and long distance. Hence , authorities must give attention towards road maintenance by making them wide, proper diversions of vehicles, sign board and signals lights, time to time covering potholes. For example, in 2017 above 20 thousand individuals lost their life because of potholes and many got injured due to accidents. Thus, it is necessary to keep on checking on roads and spend money to keep it fine for public.

To conclude, funding on the both means of transport is equally required because both masses use it equally so nothing can be neglected and expenses should be managed for two in same way.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89361702128 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59818974839 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1997282602 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106384911632 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406112852329 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391315955278 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648748840824 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379629808707 0.056905535591 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 11.3001002004 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments