Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
At present, undertaking academic studies has been an imperative approach if countries want to compete in the globalized world. However, there are also some contentious issues about whether governments are the ones in charge of the resources and monitoring or private corporations are. In my opinion, while there are some arguments favoring scientific research by corporations, I agree that this should be funded and supervised predominantly by the state.
When private sectors are involved, the profits are their priority. In terms of the quality of the research itself, corporations that carry this out may be tempted to manipulate results in maximize monetary gain. In addition to that, there have been numerous scandals about new products being published hurriedly after inadequate testing trials. A particularly striking example of this would be GM crops, which have not been proven the long-term effect of the products on not only human health but also a whole ecosystem. This would destroy the natural habitats as a result of meddling with nature.
Higher-quality products can be carried out if governments are involved. In this regard, research is designated to benefit the society rather than breaking into a competitive edge or new markets. For instance, thalidomide, developed by a German drug company, resulted in the birth of thousands of malformed children. If this product was under the control of government, the result would be much more different. Moreover, knowledge gained can be shared worldwide throughout the academic community. This means that every country is accessible to the research information despite the distance and ethic, hence leading to a better communication between countries.
To sum up, governments’ influences on scientific research trump that of private sectors. Therefore, I strongly agree with the view that government should be solely responsible for monitoring and controlling of this in terms of producing higher-quality products and sharing knowledge globally.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55700325733 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06727988984 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618892508143 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3112402904 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241469298242 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0740309826102 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656723224503 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162397232183 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0805317961322 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.