The volume of health are decreasing aamong the youth kids in this day and age. It is not just because of inadequacy in physical health, they are unaware of unhealthy lifestyles by being inactive. And hence, Schools should be obligate such physical learnings and sport education to the all students. In this essay will discuss the reason for ill-health of the children and why school should imposed such education mandatory to them and state my opinion accordingly in conclusion.
Why state of health of the teenagers are in danger nowadays? There are several major reason behind the weak health of the childrens such as anxiety, the risk of obesity and unconsciousness. One of the reason of it is , dearth of physical activity in schools. Schools are provided knowledge and excellence but not considering the cognitive health of physical education that must and very crucial for children's growth in terms of their health. The recent studies on Physical Education by World health organisation (WHO) mention on report that over 66% of school does not have enough equipment for physical exercise and lower number of educators that are able.to provide the sufficient knowledge of sports activities and education. Another cause of unhealthy lifestyles among the childers is advent in technology that teenagers are more playing video games rather than playing sports outside their homes. In China, for example, every single kids have mobile phones and thus, the academic excellence are lower than before. Consequently, these are affected pessimistically in kids, both, physical and mental health that are resulting into health complications.
To reduce such effects, Schools should be requisite physical education by increasing enough disciplinary number of educators who are abole to teach efficient education of sports activities to the students. By encouraging childrens more to these activities, they are able to excel their career goals. It also enables them to imbibes quality duch leadership, sharing, team spirit and tolerance. A study conducted by the US health department in 2018 described that those students who being actively participants in sports activities are able to deal with difficult situations and able to achieve success in their academics.
To conclude this essay, we have discussed the reason that affects childrens health and fitness and benefits of the obligatory introduction of physical education and sports learnings for all students. I believe that sport and physical activities are the key elements to endure any success in life so school should imposed mandatory education of sports and physical activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'obligated'?
Suggestion: obligated
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2223.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39563106796 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83187414367 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 698.4 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5220676994 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319232746604 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10425300876 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651883790206 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213255009759 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397459844169 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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