With the improvements in today’s health care, society has to care for more and more elderly people.
Do you feel that society will be able to cope with the increase in numbers of elderly people today and how can it be managed?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
With the development in modern technologies in medical facilities, People think that society has to look after elderly people more efficiently. In this essay, the following issues related to senior citizens are explained below with the following measure to manage the same.
Nowadays, It has been accounted that there many countries around the world where the number of old people has increased significantly. With that, It becomes really very difficult to look after those citizens because such people demand extra care and time. Moreover, to overcome such issues the government has also made various plans and built an infrastructure for older generations including everything that requires. At the same time, different NGOs are also a part of these initiatives whose main agenda is based on old and retired people's welfare.
On the other hand, In any country, when the number of above working-class people start to increase it gets reflected in that particular countries economy. Further, manpower issues start to arouse because industries need young and fit personalities for faster and better work. Moreover, In such a situation, the authorities spend a large amount of capital and the returns are zero. For example, In Japan the average population of people above 60 years, is astonishing and the country is struggling to overcome this situation.
To conclude my essay, I would say that It is a challenging situation when the number of people in any country starts getting old and worse when the population of elderly people overtakes the population of younger citizens. Whereas, I believe that it will be a very challenging task for any society to cope with it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...se it gets reflected in that particular countries economy. Further, manpower issues start...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, really, so, whereas, as to, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21481481481 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81803908902 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7328256262 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270237533486 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918518178464 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761369187928 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161104864913 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548336699993 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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