An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies.
People are doing shopping online more frequently these days because of the diversity of products which can be found on line. Changing classical market with virtual one can bring some benefits but as well has its own disadvantages. In this essay I will try to look to both sides and to draw a conclusion.
First lets see the good part of this kind of business and first of all, is the possibility to find everything what is needed or wanted to be bought. Moreover it is accessible in any part of the country and gives to all people equal possibilities to procure it. Apart of that with on line shopping the customer has the possibility to find out all technical specification or everything else about product before making a purchase. The last one but not at less important is possibility to compare the price of products which it is not so easy when shopping are do in traditional shops.
Taking over the disadvantage the most important is the security of transaction. Nowadays more and more scams were happens online and despite of permanent improvement of online banking it is all the time the possibility to loose some money in this transactions. In the detriment of online shopping can be mentioned the difference between picture which we can see on screen and the real one.
From companies point of view the advantages are on the side of big retails because they have enough money to invest in technology and they are able to increase the number of items which are offering to the customer and as well they can afford to promote their website and can offer a high secure payment option. For small business it is difficult to achieved those one and in my opinion harm many particular sales.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... what is needed or wanted to be bought. Moreover it is accessible in any part of the cou...
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Line 3, column 262, Rule ID: APART_A_PART[2]
Message: Wrong collocation. Did you mean 'apart from'?
Suggestion: Apart from
...ople equal possibilities to procure it. Apart of that with on line shopping the customer...
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Line 3, column 559, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...ich it is not so easy when shopping are do in traditional shops. Taking over th...
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Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...g it is all the time the possibility to loose some money in this transactions. In the...
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... the possibility to loose some money in this transactions. In the detriment of onlin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, kind of, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69899665552 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69596751602 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.592903875 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127561390568 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382764666626 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363555937019 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0672402924955 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382103026318 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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