An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies.
People are doing shopping online more frequently these days because of the diversity of products which can be found on line. Changing classical market with virtual one can bring some benefits but as well has its own disadvantages. In this essay I will try to look to both sides and to draw a conclusion.
First lets see the good part of this kind of business and first of all, is the possibility to find everything what is needed or wanted to be bought. Moreover it is accessible in any part of the country and gives to all people equal possibilities to procure it. Apart of that with on line shopping the customer has the possibility to find out all technical specification or everything else about product before making a purchase. The last one but not at less important is possibility to compare the price of products which it is not so easy when shopping are do in traditional shops.
Taking over the disadvantage the most important is the security of transaction. Nowadays more and more scams were happens online and despite of permanent improvement of online banking it is all the time the possibility to loose some money in this transactions. In the detriment of online shopping can be mentioned the difference between picture which we can see on screen and the real one.
From companies point of view the advantages are on the side of big retails because they have enough money to invest in technology and they are able to increase the number of items which are offering to the customer and as well they can afford to promote their website and can offer a high secure payment option. For small business it is difficult to achieved those one and in my opinion harm many particular sales.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...me product as mentioned in the picture. Thats why consumer gets disappointed from the...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...ting. Due to this reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a produ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... man hours and other things, which will affect on companies profit. Again, they will star...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11418685121 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47162026655 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6341462275 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.45 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783691266584 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273761814591 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030155917441 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554744357341 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019743636628 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.