Instructions
Read the question below and write an essay dealing with problems and solutions.
You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task.
Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan.
Only then attempt to write this essay.
In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs.
What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?
Countries development is measured with many parameters, among those parameters these two factors have a huge influence such as the economy and the availability of skilled labours like doctors, engineers and IT professionals. In this contemporary era, the talented labour force from developing countries is shifting to first-grade countries for alluring job options. This essay will discuss the principle problems associated with brain drain and suggest few pragmatic solutions in the following paragraphs.
Problems that might have lead to this current situation may include poor employment ratio, the decline in the standard income, negligible infrastructure and non-progression in the carrier development. With the rapid outflow of people like health care professionals and computer professionals, the government will definitely face an unbearable shortage of experts in those fields. Just because of this shortage common man faces numerous challenges to get basic amenities such as advanced medical facilities and better education. For instance, approximately 35 % of people in the third nations are suffering from the shortage of basic medical facilities owing to migration towards the western world at a large level.
Governments should come forward in the development of welfare projects and schemes that provides better recognition and support to the valuable workforce of the society and not focus on spending billions of dollars on a fancy electoral policy. Standardised income based on the quality of service provided should be regulated in all sectors of society. in addition, countries should encourage the professionals to continue their academic prospects for the welfare of their citizens by providing economic support.
In conclusion, Skilled People who migrate to developed countries for higher-income are not doing so by choice, it is always due to the restraints that suppress them in their home countries. Hence Government and lawmakers should look into this matter and provide valuable changes with a good understanding of their needs.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, may, so, third, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.72638436482 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09808318369 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635179153094 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.6282136383 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111141316729 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420548163883 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459171962218 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0633305898123 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271758266713 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.25 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.