With the increase in globalization international travel and tourism has become very popular. There is a rising trend among people to explore the different parts of the world. However, this trend comes with both benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh its advantages because of two prominent reasons. In the following paragraphs, I will justify my stand / opinion with valid arguments and examples.
Firstly, international tourism has raised a significant amount of environmental concerns. Many places are affected by land and water pollution as a result of tourist activity. For instance, ecologically sensitive hill stations attract a lot of tourists and to accommodate them more resorts and hotels are being built there. Unfortunately, this leads to environmental problems. Littering is another concern. Tourists leave behind leftover food, plastic cans and plastic wrappers in places like beaches and forests. They not only pollute the surroundings, but also lead to the death of innocent animals who choke on them.
Additionally, many people do not respect the customs and traditions of the host country / the country they visit. For instance, in Middle East countries, it is mandatory for women to cover themselves with hijab. In the same manner, places like temples should be visited without wearing any footwear. Many foreigners are not aware of these culturally significant norms and they unintentionally hurt the sentiments of that culture.
In conclusion, although international tourism has helped in boosting the economy in terms of foreign direct investments and other international trade agreements at the same time, it has also caused considerable environmental damage and in some cases cultural conflicts. Hence, I believe that its downsides overshadow the upsides.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63898916968 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13775076902 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657039711191 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.286169898 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.7777777778 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3888888889 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256209001391 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634511150664 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696647667203 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135044346169 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406021868278 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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