The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that the internet has changed our lives and today it plays an important role for many people. Personally, I agree with the statement that everyone will behave in the same way in the near future. In fact, I feel this way for two reasons, what I will explore in the following essay.
First and foremost, plenty of teens prefer to get knowledge from different Internet resources. It is a striking aspect of the Internet users and it leads to similarity in their knowledge and behaviour. The underlying reason is that a lot of materials are copied from other web-sites and they have no unique thoughts or ideas about a topic. In addition, despite the fact that the Internet contains a huge number of data, most of this information can be wrong. Consequently, people and, especially students, just absorb other ideas and explanations, so they do not try to dig deeper and to understand main principles and features of articles.
Secondly, social networks define the way how people live. One should note here, that the great number of adolescents use facebook in order to communicate with each other. However, such media resources become the main way of spending free time, so people just stare at smartphones everywhere. Thus, a lot of people suffer from the similar diseases, because they use the same gadgets, they have sedentary lifestyle and they have similar hobbies such as scrolling a celebrity’s newsfeed in the Instagram.
To draw the conclusion, I am of the opinion that because of the Internet people have the same passions and lifestyles that lead to several detrimental effects.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, i feel, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9963099631 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77553086354 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605166051661 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0893971433 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.153846154 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167320372944 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614326303697 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058921677105 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107313378848 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711116753122 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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