Some people are born with innate talent which helps them to learn skills fast and become competent at those skills, especially at sport and, music. Somehow, there is an argument that those skills can be trained to a child to become expert on those fields. This essay will consider both aspects and include my viewpoints.
Some people have demonstrated that the inheritance of talents is true, and this is also scientifically correct. Some characteristics as well as the information of the successors can be transmitted based on the regulations of AND information to the next generation. For example, Mozart was gifted with an art talent from heaven, which was recognized by his father, who was instrumental in bringing his name to the world.
However, I believe that people can sharpen their skills without being gifted one. If they have dedication to study some skills and there is good training with frequent practice, they can become successful even more than talented person. Nowadays, some institute have been established to both recognize talent at the earlier stage and train untalented one to become expert in the field they want to learn, such as sport and music. Any parents, based on their background, assume that every child has their own talent. But the reality shows that success is mostly based on that is effort and enduring practices.
To sum up, having talent is a luckiness and good opportunity in their life. However, success will be not only always for talents person but also for efforts and practices
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03543307087 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65092805539 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586614173228 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8844396716 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325971354626 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103478279626 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659872810931 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190585101289 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369801722091 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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