It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, It is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views
some people are born with innate talent which helps them to learn things fast and become competent at those skills, especially at sport and music. Somehow, excellence in those fields does not necessarily require gifted talents as training might prove efficiency. This essay will consider both aspects and I would argue that we could offer proper training for the persons to become successful.
some people have demonstrated that the inheritance of talents is true, which is also scientifically correct. some characteristics as well as the information of the successors can be transmitted based on the regulations of AND information to the next generation. In contrast, in the history of music and sport in the world, there are merely persons born as genius even without having an art background. For instance, Lady Gaga, whose affinity for music comes to her mind naturally, was born in a family which is of no relation to music or art.
however, I believe that people can sharpen their skills without being gifted one. If they are willing to dedicate their time to studying more skills as well as undergoing training with frequent practice, they can become even more successful than talented person. Nowadays, some institutes have been established to train/nurture untalented one to become expert in the field they want to learn, such as sport and music. Any parents, based on their background, assume that every child has their own talent, yet the reality success comes down to on effort and nonstop practices.
To sum up, being gifted with talent is a luck of a person and good opportunity in their life. however, it is practice and efforts that determine success the most rather than talents alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09219858156 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71048204975 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.378882056 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269506903078 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898169325715 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485874215387 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153891950827 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377458785743 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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